Good morning Year 1!
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7.5.20 English blog writing and publishing printable
Today I would like you to do your writing and send me a picture or write it in the comments box if your fingers don’t get too tired!
First have a read of the story again:
Acorn wood book printable version
This is your writing activity for today:
Page 1 and 2 of Acorn Wood
Things to remember when writing:
- Capital letters and full stops
- Neat handwriting
- Your sounds
Use the sound mats if you need to!
Hello Miss Travers,
1- Tortoise went to the park with his bicycle and he saw his friend from school Frog. Frog gave a gift to Tortoise because Tortoise visited him when he was sick.
2- Rabbit, Blackbird and Pig were talking about their beautiful and lovely days whilst they were drinking the delicious tea of Rabbit. After that, the three friends made a big chocolate cake for the dessert. When Rabbit and Pig were playing games, Blackbird went in the kitchen and take half of the cake and ate it behind Rabbit’s tent……
That is so naughty of blackbird! Excellent writing! I like the adjectives you have used!
T- instead of ‘went in the kitchen and take half the cake’ it will be went in the kitchen and took half the cake.
Super writing!
Good Morning Miss Travers.
1-Frog was bringing Bear a present because Bear had sent him an invitation to his Birthday. Tortoise is riding his bike to also go to see Bear on his Birthday.
2- Squirrel and mole also get an invitation to Bear’s party. Pig and blackbird have a picnic with Rabbit. They eats lots of delicious food such as crisps, biscuits and cake. They drink tea and then it starts to rain and then they all cuddle up in the tent in a nice cosy blanket and then they all went to sleep. The next morning they woke and went to Pig’s house and played all day.
Well done Isabella! A great continuation of the story! It sounds very cosy!
1. Frog and Tortoise
Frog made a present for his friend the Fox because he is his best friend.
The tortoise rode a bike to his friend Blackbird because they play together.
2. What happens next
Rabbit, Blackbird and Pig drink the warm tea. They played Stuck In the Mud and it was night time. Then, they go to Rabbit’s tent to sleep. In the morning, Rabbit made breakfast of cheese and carrots and lettuce.
Well done Flavia! I’m sure they liked their breakfast but I don’t know if I would like cheese carrots and lettuce together!
Hello Miss Travers,
1. Frog is opening a present from bear that he sent for his birthday. Tortoise is riding his bike to frogs birthday party, he is very excited!
2. Pig, blackbird and rabbit have finished their drinks. They are going to walk to frogs party. Squirrel, mole and bear are also going. They all have lots of fun. They eat cake, sweets, crisps, pizza and chocolate and play games. Frog gets lots of presents.
Well done Saoirse! Sounds like a great party!
Good Morning Miss Travers!
1. Tortoise ?hurriedly went home after school and took his bike with him. He is going to see his friend Frog ?.
2. Pig ? and Blackbird? are enjoying the warm drink made by Rabbit . Then they heard somebody calling Rabbit’s ?name.
The three were surprised to see Tortoise ?and Frog ?.
“ Happy Birthday” , said Tortoise and Frog as they handed Rabbit their present. Rabbit also made some warm drink for the two and they all enjoyed the night.
Super writing!!
Well done Year 1! You’ve done some wonderful writing here. I’m sure Miss Travers is going to love reading your stories when she gets back from the hub!
One day Bear brought Frog a invitation, it said come to my party. Rabbit and Tortoise had one too, then Tortoise decided to go to Bear ‘s party on his bike, and Rabbit decided to walk. When they arrived at Bear’ s party they were surprised because it was very beautiful. There were balloons everywhere, then a big surprise popped out of the box it was Rabbit “SURPRISE” she said! “It was really an amazing surprise” everyone said. The vanilla cake had cherrys on the top!It was very delicious, the end.
Excellent adjectives Louise, it made me want their birthday cake!
Dear Miss Travers,
Pig is hiding behind the bush. Bear loves writing letters to his friends. Mole and pig visit rabbit in a big tent. I think at the end mole and pig are going to sleep with rabbit. It was tortoise’s birthday and he cycled to have some tea with rabbit, mole and pig. Soon he was there. I have a present, it was a baby tortoise. Happy Birthday!!!
Ah that’s a great continuation of the story! Well done!
Good morning Miss Travers
I rote this on my Dad’s iPhone
Frog and Tortoises holiday,
Frog is going on holiday for a week with Tortoise.
They’re going to have fun at the beach.
Well done Heloise! Did you write more in your home learning book?
1. The Frog might give a present toTortoise because he has got his cloths on. The Tortoise is riding a bike and he’s going to the park with Frog following him.
2. Mouse and Dormouse are doing a picnic in the rainbow. Fox and Badger are friends. Badger likes to give flowers to Fox.
That’s nice of Badger! Excellent writing Mateus!
Wow Year 1! I have really enjoyed reading your writing. What is your favourite character from Acorn Wood? I like the look of the little mole!
1) Tortoise is driving a bicycle
2) Frog has a present
Well done Junior!
My favorite character is the fox. Because he has a hat and ears. Also, his ears have a shape of a cat
That’s lovely to hear Junior! I really like his checked jacket!
Frog and tortoise are best of friends. They are playing together in the pond. They found lots of seaweed that were tickling them.
Well done Lucia!
1. I think frog is making presents to give to his friends.
2. I think tortoise is riding his bike in the garden.
Blackbird and pig are going to visit their friend Rabbit. Rabbit makes them a hot chocolate with a marshmallow in it. Then they draw pictures and go to sleep. The next day they played with their bikes riding around the garden with tortoise. The end of the story.
That sounds a nice day! I would like a hot chocolate with marshmellows too!
1. The frog is hiding a present for her friend Tortoise. Tortoise is riding his bike to go visit his friend Fox.
2. The Mouse and Dormouse were playing hide and seek together and enjoyed their snacks.
I’m glad they enjoyed their snacks! Well done Jay!
Hello Miss Travers.
After giving the tortoise his present the frog and tortoise go and play on a hill and then slide down the hill. After playing together and having lots of fun they have a nice drink and somethng to eat, then they take a nap because they are exhausted from all the fun they have had.
Sounds like a fun and tiring day! Excellent writing!
Good afternoon Miss Travers,
1. Tortoise and Frog are going to a birthday party. I think it is Dormouse’s party because she is wearing a pretty dress.
2. Rabbit, Tortoise and Mouse were camping together. They played with their torches. One day they went out to play hide and seek.
Well done Gabrielle! Excellent writing! I played hide and seek today too at the hub!
Hello Miss Travers
Frog is sending a present to rabbit.
Tortoise is driving a bike.
Story
Tortoise gives rabbit a present for his birthday. Rabbit ? made a very warm drink. The frog become best friends with tortoise ?.
That’s a great few sentences! What happened next?
Good morning, Miss Travers!
Based on my predictions from earlier this week, this is how I think the story will be:
Blackbird and Pig are going to visit their friend.
Hello, Rabbit! Rabbit makes them a nice warm drink.
That afternoon Rabbit was having a party and he invited all the best friends of Acorn Wood. Blackbird and Pig arrived early to help decorate the party. The first one to arrive was Hen. Fox was second. Mouse was third and he brought an acorn. Frog, Squirrel, Mole and Bear brought a present and a card. Dormouse brought an apple. Badger brought a rose. Tortoise came on a fast blue bike. At the end Mole helped clean up the party by sweeping the floor.
Well done Camila, I enjoyed reading your story! I’m glad he had a good birthday! That’s nice that they brought presents!
1. Tortoise went to frog house on her bicycle. When she arrived Frog gave her a present.
2. Everyone will go to Rabbit’s tent and they will have a big party.