Good Morning Class 4!
I am glad so many of you enjoyed the video of The Tempest yesterday. It really is an exciting text for us to be looking at!
Today’s English lesson will be a SPaG sessions. What you learn today you will need to use in this week’s writing task.
First of all, let’s look at some punctuation…
Using Bullet Points
Bullet points can be used to
•Break up complicated information
•Make it easier to read
•Turn it into a list
Don’t forget to add a colon before the list.
You can visit the BBC Bitesize website for a short video tutorial:
https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/topics/zvwwxnb/articles/z2yydxs
Punctuation Exercise
Prospero is trying to practise magic but is having trouble following this spell. Can you use colons and bullet points to re-write this spell as a clearer set of instructions?
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest. Ingredients, two burning pieces of wood, 500g crackling black pepper, a tambourine, three sprigs of sea holly, a crushed light bulb. This is how to make a Tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked. Warm a large pan over an open fire. Add a crushed light bulb and 500g of crackling black pepper to the pan. Wait for it to start smoking. Stir in the sea holly. Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in. Put on heatproof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood. Toss the wood into the pan. Wait for the flames to disappear. Sing ‘Tempest, Tempest, Tempest’ three times. Throw the potion into the sea.
Next, let’s think about some grammar…
A verb is a word used to describe an action, state or occurrence. When writing, make sure every sentence includes a verb.
Click this link if you need more information:
https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/topics/zwwp8mn/articles/zpxhdxs
Grammar Exercise
Imperative verbs are verbs which tell someone what to do. They are sometimes called ‘bossy verbs’.
For example:
Throw the potion into the sea.
Toss the wood into the pan.
Sprinkle the light bulb into the potion.
Can you write 5 of your own sentences using imperative verbs? They could be giving someone directions around your house or you could be telling someone how to make your breakfast? Think of it as a set of instructions.
I hope you enjoy!
From Miss Lee
* Two burning pieces of wood
* 500 g of crackling Black pepper
* Tambourine
* Three springs of sea holly
* Crushed light bulb
* This is how to make a tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked.
* Warm a large pan over a open fire.
* Add crushed lightbulb and 500 g of crackling black pepper into the pan.
* Wait for it to start smoking
* Stir in the sea holly
* Break up the tambourine and throw pieces in
* Put on heatproof gloves and pick up burning pieces of wood
* Toss wood into pan
* Wait for flames to disappear
* Sing “tempest , tempest , tempest “ three times throw in potion in the sea
Good work Albert!
The sentence ‘This is how to make a tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked.’ is not part of the instructions or list of ingredients so it does not need a bullet point. Also don’t forget full stops!
INGREDIENTS
*two burning pieces of wood
*500g of crackling black pepper
*tambourine
*three springs of sea holly
*crushed light bulb
HOW TO MAKE A TEMPEST.
*warm a pan over an open fire.
*are tambourine he crushed light bulb and the black pepper to the pan.
*wait until smoking.
*mix in the sea holly
*smash up the tambourine and throw it in.
*put on year-long gloves a d get the burning wood.
*throw the wood in the mixture.
*wait for the flaim to dissappear.
*sing tempest tempest tempest .
*lastly, throw the option in the sea.
Good work Holly, well done! Just remember capital letters next time!
Hello everyone, how are you al felling today? Hope none of you are getting too bored!!
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest.
Ingredients;
– 2 burning pieces of wood
– 500g crackling black pepper
– a tambourine
– 3 sprigs of sea holly
– a crushed light bulb
This is how to make a Tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked.
1. Warm a large pan over an open fire
2. Add a crushed light bulb and 500g crackling black pepper to the pan.
3. Wait for it to start smoking.
4. Stir in the sea holly.
5. Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in.
6. Put on heatproof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood.
7. Toss the wood into the pan.
8. Wait for the flames to disappear.
9. Sing ‘Tempest Tempest Tempest’ three times.
10. Throw the potion into the sea.
Challenge:
This recipe is telling you how to make scramble eggs, baked beans and bacon for four people.
Ingredients;
– 6 medium eggs
– salt and pepper
– butter
– baked beans
– 12 rashes of streaky bacon
Method;
1. Place the rashes of bacon on a grill pan and grill under a medium heat for 15 minutes turning occasionally.
2. Crack the eggs into a large beaker. Season the eggs with a little salt and pepper.
3. Whisk the eggs with a fork whilst a knob of butter is melting in a non stick pan on a low heat.
4. Pour the eggs into the pan and stir gently with a spatula.
5. Occasionally check the bacon and turn as necessary.
6. Keep gently stirring the eggs to make sure that they do not stick to the pan.
7. Pour the baked beans into a microwavable dish with a lid.
8. When the eggs are almost ready, turn off the heat and gently fold in another nob of butter then leave to one side.
9. Place the beans into the microwave and warm up as per the microwaves instructions.
10. When the bacon is ready turn off the grill and pace the bacon in a large piece of kitchen roll to soak up any excess fat.
11. Serve everything on four clean plates with toast/bread and HP sauce/tomato ketchup as required.
12. ENJOY!!
Miss you all!
Sophie
Good work Sophie! Your instructions on how to make baked beans, scrambled eggs and bacon has made me hungry! I may have to follow your recipe and make my own!
Good morning Miss Lee ?
Here is my punctuation exercise on using colons and bullet points.
This are the ingredients for a spell magic to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest:
. 2 burning pieces of wood
. 500g of crackling black pepper
. A tambourine
. 3 sprigs of sea holly
. A crushed light bulb
This is how to make a Tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked:
. Warm a large pan over an open fire
. Add a crushed light bulb and 500g of crackling black pepper to the pan
. Wait for it to start smoking
. Stir in the sea holly
. Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in
. Put on heatproof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood
. Toss the wood into the pan
. Wait for the flames to disappear
. Sing ‘Tempest, Tempest, Tempest’ three times
. Throw the potion into the sea
Grammar exercise using imperative verbs:
1. Pour a cup of milk into the bowl.
2. Wash the dishes after you eat.
3. Brush your teeth when you wake up.
4. Clean the table when we’re about to eat.
5. Knead the dough to bake our homemade cookies.
Oh and sorry Miss Lee sorry i forgot my full stops! ??
Good work Clare, well done! Don’t worry about the full stops now, it is good you noticed and you can remember them next time!
You will need:
. Two burning pieces of wood
. 500g of crackling black pepper
. Tambourine
. Three springs of sea holly
. Crushed light bulb
Now you have a tempest.
. Warm a large pan over a open fire.
. Add crushed light bulb and 500g of crackling black pepper to the pan.
. Wait for it to start smoking.
. Stir in the sea holly.
. Brake up the tambourine and throw pieces in.
. Put on heatproof gloves and pick up burning pieces of wood.
. Toss wood into pan.
. Wait for flames to disappear.
. Sing tempest three times then throw position in the sea.
Great work Pablo! Well done!
How to make your ?
1. Toss your covers, toys and pillow of your bed.
2. Tuck in the bottom sheet.
3. Place your cover on you bed and tuck it in .
4. Fluff the pillow until it is puffy and put it on the bed
5. Place you toys and cuddles on your bed how you like
6. Finished.
Ps call mother for approval
Great work girls! A very important final step! 😀 I wonder if anyone from Class 4 will follow your steps and make their own bed today?
Imperative verbs:
1) Eat your dinner.
2)Do your homework.
3)Clean your bedroom.
4)Get ready for school.
5)Go to bed.
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest. Ingredients:
-two burning pieces of wood
-500g crackling black pepper
-a tambourine
-three sprigs of sea holly
-a crushed light bulb
This is how to make a Tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked:
-Warm a large pan over an open fire.
-Add a crushed light bulb.
-500g of crackling black pepper to the pan.
-Wait for it to start smoking.
-Stir in the sea holly.
-Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in.
-Put on heatproof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood.
-Toss the wood into the pan.
-Wait for the flames to disappear.
-Sing ‘Tempest, Tempest, Tempest’ three times.
-Throw the potion into the sea.
1.Get on a device.
2.Go to st. Vincents.com.
3.Go to year groups and press year 4
4.Press on english.
5.DO YOUR WORK!
Good work Rafael! Well done for remembering punctuation!
This a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and thunder together to make a tempest.
Ingredients:
* Two burning peace of wood.
* 500 g of crackling black pepper.
* Tambourine.
* Three springs of sea holly
* Crushed light bulb
This is how to make a tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked:
* Warm a large pan over open fire.
* Add crushed lightbulb and 500 g of crackling pepper into the pan.
* Wait for it to start smoking.
* Stir it in sea holly.
* Break up the tambourine and throw peaces in.
* Put on heatproof gloves and pick up burning wood.
* Toss wood into pan.
* wait for flames to disappear.
* Sing ” tempest, tempest, tempest” three times.
* Throw potion in the sea.
My imperative sentences:
1) Sit on your chair.
2) Go to lunch now.
3) Do your homework!
4) Tidy up.
5) Eat your veg.
Sometimes there is an explamation mark after your sentence
Example:
Do your homework!
An imperative sentence NEVER has the word please!
Good work Stella! You are right about sentences using imperative verbs, that is definitely why they are sometimes called ‘bossy verbs’!
Good morning Miss Lee and year 4
You will need
.Two Buring Pieces of Wood
.500g 9f crackling black pepper
.a tambourie and throw the pecies in.
.put on heatproof gloves and pick up the pecies of burning wood.
. Toss the wood into the pan.
. Wait for the flames to disappear.
. Sing Tempest,TempestTempest three times and throw the potion in the sea.
Well done Karter, I can see you have used the conjunction ‘and’ to join some of the instructions together!
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lighting and rain together to make a tempest.
This is what you need:
* Two burning pieces of wood.
* 500g crackling black pepper.
* A tambourine.
* Three sprigs of sea holly.
* A crushed light bulb.
This is how you can make a tempest and caused boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked.
This is what you need to do:
* Warm a large pan over an open fire.
* Add crushed light bulb.
* Add 500g crackling black pepper to the pan.
* Wait for it to start smoking.
* Stir in the sea holly.
* Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in.
* Put on heatproof gloves and pick up burning pieces of wood.
* Toss wood into the pan.
* Wait for the flames to disappear.
* Sing “tempest, tempest, tempest” three times.
* And throw the potion into sea
Thanks, Tijne
Great work Tijne, well done!
1. Open the door.
2. Jump higher now.
3. Come on run faster.
4. Wash the dishes now.
5. Walk faster now.
Well done Ajay!
Punctuation Exercise:
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest.
Ingredients:
• 2 burning pieces of wood
• 500g crackling black pepper
• 1 tambourine
• 3 sprigs of sea holly
• 1 crushed light bulb.
This is how to make a Tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked:
• Warm a large pan over an open fire.
• Add a crushed light bulb and 500g of crackling black pepper to the pan.
• Wait for it to start smoking.
• Stir in the sea holly.
• Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in.
• Put on heatproof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood.
• Toss the wood into the pan.
• Wait for the flames to disappear.
• Sing ‘Tempest, Tempest, Tempest’ three times.
• Throw the potion into the sea.
Grammar Exercise:
1. Make that PowerPoint presentation about Global Warming, or you’re fired!
2. Vacuum the hallway, unless you want us all to get hay fever.
3. Turn on the light so no one runs into a wall.
4. Pass me the butter so we can make some fairy bread.
5. Throw the ball over here and we could make the winning shot!
Good work Lucy!
Fairy bread sounds interesting! Have you been making some?
How to make ?,⚡️and ? was together to make a tempest
INGREDIENTS :
*two burning pieces of wood
*500g of crackling black pepper
*1 tambourine
*three sprigs of sea holly
*one crushed light bulb ?
This is how to make a tempest and cause boats ?♀️ to be torn apart and shipwrecked.
METHOD:
*Warm a large pan over an open fire ?.
*add a crushed lightbulb ? and 500g of crackled black pepper to the pan.
*wait for it to start smoking.
*stir in the sea holly
*break up the tambourine and put the peices in.
*put on heatproof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood.
*toss the wood into the pan.
*wait for the flames to disappear.
*sing ‘tempest tempest tempest’three times
*throw the potion ? into the sea
I miss you guys
Good work Amarissa! I am missing you all too!
I like fairy bread too Lucy! Yum!
Hi Miss Lee,
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest.
Ingredients:
– two burning pieces of wood,
– 500g crackling black pepper,
– a tambourine,
– three sprigs of sea holly,
– a crushed light bulb.
This is how to make a Tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked:
– Warm a large pan over an open fire.
-Add a crushed light bulb
– 500g of crackling black pepper to the pan.
– Wait for it to start smoking.
-Stir in the sea holly.
– Break up the tambourine
– throw the pieces in.
-Put on heatproof gloves
– pick up the burning pieces of wood.
-Toss the wood into the pan.
– Wait for the flames to disappear.
– Sing ‘Tempest, Tempest, Tempest’ three times.
– Throw the potion into the sea.
Grammar exercise
1. Take a bowl from the cupboard
2. Put some milk in the bowl
3. Put cereals in the bowl
4. Take an orange
5. Press it to make a delicious orange juice
Hello Louis! Great work!
Well done for writing some instructions of your own! Freshly made orange juice sounds delicious! Have you been making it in the mornings?
How to create a tempest ?
You will need:
-two burning pieces of wood
-500g crackling black pepper
-a smashed tambourine
-3 sprigs of sea holly
-a crushed light bulb ?
-heatproof gloves ?
The instructions:
-warm a pan over a large fire?
-add crushed light bulb ? and sea holly
-Wait for smoke ?
-add tambourine
– put on heatproof gloves and put burning wood
-wait for flames to disappear
-sing : “ tempest, tempest, tempest” and throw potion into the sea
?➡️?
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest.
Ingredients:
• Two burning pieces of wood
• 500g crackling black pepper
• A tambourine
• Three springs of sea holy
• A crushed light bulb
This is how to make tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked .warm a large pan over an open fire .add a crushed light bulb and 500g of crackling black pepper to the pan wait for it to start smoking. Stir the sea holly. Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in .put on heat proof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood .toss the wood in to the pan wait for the flames to diaper. Sing tempest ,tempest, tempest three times. Throw the potion into the sea.
Good work Giordano! You have used bullet points correctly during the first part of the recipe.
For the second part, check if you can include bullet points and capital letters.
Fairy bread is bread spread with butter and 100s & 1000s sprinkled on top. No, I haven’t been making any yet, but tomorrow we might make some and we’ll send you a photo!
Sounds tasty! I look forward to seeing the photos!
Magic to make tempest
Ingredients:
– Two burning pieces of wood.
– 500g of crackling black pepper.
– A tambourine
– Three springs of sea Holy.
– A crushed light bulp.
This how to make a tempest.
– warm a large pan over an open fire.
– wait for it to start smoking
– mix in the sea holy.
– brake up the tambourine and put the pieces in .
– put heat proof gloves and pick the pieces of wood.
– toss the wood into the pan
-wait for the flames to disappear.
– sing “tempest tempest tempest ” three times.
– throw the potion into the sea.
How to boil an egg
-boil the water
– put the egg in the boiling water.
– set a timer to six minute.
– when the timer is finished remove the egg from the pan.
– peal the shell and enjoy eating.
Good work Martin well done! I had two boiled eggs and some toast for my lunch yesterday! Your instructions would have come in handy!
This is a magic spell to bring thunder, lightning and rain together to make a Tempest. Ingredients:
. 2 burning pieces of wood.
. 1 tambourine
. three sprigs of sea holly
. a crushed light bulb
This is how to make a Tempest and cause boats to be torn apart and shipwrecked tempest:
1.Warm a large pan over an open fire
2.Add a crushed light bulb and 500g of crackling black pepper to the pan
3. Wait for it to start smoking and Stir in the sea holly.
4.Break up the tambourine and throw the pieces in. Put on heatproof gloves and pick up the burning pieces of wood
5.. Toss the wood into the pan.
6.wait for the flames to disappear
7.Sing ‘Tempest, Tempest, Tempest’ three times.
8.Throw the potion into the sea.
Well done Emilie, you have used bullet points correctly!
Hi Miss Lee,
These ingredients make thunder, lightning and rain together?☁️? to make a tempest.
Ingredients:
.Two burning pieces of wood.?
.500g of crackling black pepper.?
.A tambourine ?
.Three springs of sea holy.?
.A crushed light bulb.?
How to make the tempest:
.Open a warm fire ?and put a lage pan over it.
.Wait for it to start smoking .?
.Sture in the sea holy.
.Add a crushed light bulb?
.Break up the tambourine and put it in the pan.?
.Put heat proof gloves on and pick up the pieces of burned wood.
.Toss the burned wood in the pan.
.wait for the flames to disappear?.
.Chant tempest, tempest, tempest.
.Now throw the potion into the sea.⚗
Done!
Hello Mayowa!
Good work on using bullet points!